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How we planted Gherkins ......... and Beena decided to buy cows....
Yes; This is the reality with farmers. Same case has happened with Vanilla and beetlenut farming. Vanilla which one time was fetching as much as 1500 - 3000 Rs, is fetching only 30 now. Increased rate was due to crop failure in Madagaskar and Mexico. Everybody bought Vanilla plants at 45- 100 per plant and lost heavy money. Similarly Beatlenut used to be grown only in Malnad areas of Karnataka and Assam. With rates going upto 20000/quintal, everybody - even in dry lands started growing beatlenut. Now due to excess supply and ban on Supari / Jarda, rates have become half.
Shashi
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No ! No! - bEDa! bEDa - Kannada Poetry
Thanks; We had a discussion on this point few months back and concluded that - Though Nodabyadale - gives that tinge; subsequent word - Haage instead of Haanga, makes in non-Dharwad language
Shashi
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Gelethana
Seems to have been written in a hurry. Please check the syntax (oththu, Deerga, comma, etc)
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Savi Nenapu
This is also good. But I feel that "Nanna" and "Ninna" have repeated too many times. Once you say nanna, further it is implied.
In line 7, I think it should be "Hrudayada"
Shashi
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Yaaru Nee
This has come out well. To avoid repetition, possibly you could look at relacing "Nanna" with "Enna" in line no 8.
Shashi
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Amma
You have brought out most of the aspects of mother's love. Some how, it sounds more like nursery rhyme.
Just see if you can change the way "Runa" is written in Kannada
Shashi
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Thanks Yashji; I am back after a long gap. I am now in Kolkata
Shashi
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